STORM OVER WHOOMERA 68

posted 27th Aug 2017, 2:23 PM

STORM OVER WHOOMERA 68
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27th Aug 2017, 2:23 PM

lorddarke

PLEASE LEAVE A COMMENT IF YOU CAN. THANKS.

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28th Aug 2017, 12:17 PM

warp9

It's always nice to see a new update.

I liked your force dome effect.

And I also like the way you've done your action lines to indicate character motion. This particular page didn't make too much use of such lines, but some of your other pages have a bit more.

Normal comics use a lot of action lines, but I know from my own attempts at a 3D comic that it can be hard to make those lines work in a CGI scene. You keep the lines pretty subtle, and I think they work pretty well.

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28th Aug 2017, 8:42 PM

lorddarke

warp9- Thanks, and thanks for commenting!
Great, I tried to go with the look of the force-barriers in an old sifi movie:"EARTH VS.THE FLYING SAUCERS"
And thanks about the "motion lines" I try to go easy on the use. Like you mentioned, it's easy to over-do them and make the panel a mess. Ed.

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30th Aug 2017, 12:16 AM

typhon36

Ah... a hint of possible defection? Treachery? Plotting? Conspiracy? Love it!

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15th Nov 2017, 1:59 PM

...(RockB)

I think I ran out of comment juice again. I'll continue when it comes back

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